ArtWrite 9/4: Kay Bainbridge

POV PLAY

1st : When I sigh, Alice gives me an exasperated look before reaching for her cocktail. What can I say? I know we don’t make sense together. I’m stuck in a bathysphere, and she’s always spewing elation or rage.

3rd close: When DJ sighs, Alice gives him an exasperated look and reaches for her cocktail. What can he say? They don’t make sense together. He’s stuck in a bathysphere, and she’s always spewing elation or rage.

3rd omniscient:

When DJ sighs, Alice reaches for her cocktail. It takes everything she has not to smack him.

There’s nothing he can say. He knows they don’t make sense together. He’s stuck in a bathysphere, and she’s always spewing elation or rage.

--Maggie Levine

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